I liked that the “You’ll always have me, Changmin-ah. I won’t leave, promise. It’ll just be the two of us.” is followed by "I don’t love you anymore Yunho calmly writes onto the notepad in front of him, his grip in her hair tightening as he pushes the paper towards her, tapping his pen gently against the line he wants her to read aloud." which I think is my favourite line. This succession had just the perfect level of contrast (and creepiness). It's also quite chilling how easy it seems for Yunho to play this double role.
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Date: 2011-02-14 02:57 pm (UTC)I liked that the “You’ll always have me, Changmin-ah. I won’t leave, promise. It’ll just be the two of us.” is followed by "I don’t love you anymore Yunho calmly writes onto the notepad in front of him, his grip in her hair tightening as he pushes the paper towards her, tapping his pen gently against the line he wants her to read aloud." which I think is my favourite line. This succession had just the perfect level of contrast (and creepiness). It's also quite chilling how easy it seems for Yunho to play this double role.
(This wasn't confusing at all btw. :D)