i loved it. i seriously loved everything about it. how twisted yunho is, it's amazing. not that i want him to be that twisted in rl but here, you did a great job on his character, how he's just so creepy and yet, he's so, idk, he's so obsessed with changmin, so in love and it's scary. i loved how yunho can hide it though, especially to changmin but to the girl too at first, how it seems so natural for him to be playing this doubled-edged game. changmin is interesting too. i mean, it's also very interesting to be discovering him both from the scenes where he's present (like the first one) but also, and even more, from yunho's point of view. it's both biased and unbiased at the same time and i liked that.
i'm going to see i liked and i loved about everything really because i did. it's just such a gorgeous text. i loved the fact that it goes backwards, this is a great idea and makes yunho's character even creepier and more mysterious. like, thinking him nice and then seeing him like a psycho would have been good but too simple when actually seeing him first like a psycho and then how he can behave so nicely and be like that with changmin, it's such a strong feeling lol.
i really really loved it, thank you again for writing this :)
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Date: 2011-02-14 07:22 am (UTC)i loved it. i seriously loved everything about it. how twisted yunho is, it's amazing. not that i want him to be that twisted in rl but here, you did a great job on his character, how he's just so creepy and yet, he's so, idk, he's so obsessed with changmin, so in love and it's scary. i loved how yunho can hide it though, especially to changmin but to the girl too at first, how it seems so natural for him to be playing this doubled-edged game.
changmin is interesting too. i mean, it's also very interesting to be discovering him both from the scenes where he's present (like the first one) but also, and even more, from yunho's point of view. it's both biased and unbiased at the same time and i liked that.
i'm going to see i liked and i loved about everything really because i did. it's just such a gorgeous text. i loved the fact that it goes backwards, this is a great idea and makes yunho's character even creepier and more mysterious. like, thinking him nice and then seeing him like a psycho would have been good but too simple when actually seeing him first like a psycho and then how he can behave so nicely and be like that with changmin, it's such a strong feeling lol.
i really really loved it, thank you again for writing this :)