first off and most importantly: i love you. now: omfgomfgomfg omfggggg this was so fucking interesting asdlfkjadsklfjLKJASLDFKJASKL!!!! BEFORE I SAY ANYTHING ELSE: MEMMED UP AND DOWN UNTIL MY BRAIN FALLS OUTTA MY EYE SOCKETS OMGOMGOMG MINE MINE MINE DID I MENTION HOW MUCH I LOVED YOU!? OKAY I THINK I DID THAT LIKE 3 MINUTES AGO BUT HERE IT IS AGAIN: I FUCKING LOVE YOU. i'm sooooooo fucking happy that you decided to expand this into a universe and that this homin is how you decided to start it with a huge fucking BANG and omggggg still in awe omgomgomg cannot even TAKE IT!!! AHHHHHH!!! idk why you think your writing fails in any aspect BUT THAT'S JUST YOU, I KNOW, so i'll just...tell you again that you're absolutely amazing and you need to stfu and yeah, this is my comment. i fail. rofl. 8D BUT YOU LOVE ME ANYWAY AND I LOVE YOUUUU omg and cries, btw, i love your lj username. LOL IT IS TREMENDOUSLY AWESOME. 8DDDD
OMG I JUST FINISHED READING IT YOU BITCH SOBS okay just so you know my comments were written as i was reading so in case they don't make sense...well, now you know. anyway, this was so...idek how you do it! your writing is so easy to read and it just flows so well and when i saw that it was the end i wanted to punch my laptop screen in BECAUSE HOW COULD IT BE OVER ALREADY!?!?!?!? i never wanted it to end!! ;A; junsu and changmin in the beginning had my heart swelling like woah and then yoochun ahahahahaha that bad boy and then JAEJOONG holy shit i almost fucking died with sadness. you can go from so funny to so tragic in a hearbeat and i'm always so unprepared for what comes next, but i think that's one of the great things about your writing that i just love SO. FUCKING. MUCH. when yunho finally came in, accident prone and failing three thousand ways out of the universe, i seriously wanted to die. and then in the hospital, wondering about the anon donation thing? i swear, tears welled in my eyes at such a touching, genuine, loving gesture. you don't just do that for anyone. i could barely stand to keep reading. and by the way, all your side characters COUGH HEECHUL were amazing. everything you write is just...perfect. for me, if you don't believe in perfection, SO THERE. subjectivity = my argument is better than yours. 8DDDDv anyway, the way you ended it was tremendous. just a little sight into what happens later, and things don't change at all even when everything's changed so much. ahhhh i don't even know what else to say to you, my heart is so full. :'))))) i'm gonna be floating in a happy place for so long. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh okay enough with this fail i'm going to get to my quotes now sobs. ;3;
so.
here goes.
"I didn't let you die Shim Changmin, not when you were a five months old fetus with possibly Down's Syndrome and not when you were four pounds, two ounces shy of five and transfered to an incubator for ten days, I didn't let you die."
you always start with angst, you know that? but omfg, my heart was clenching so hard, and i LOVE HIS MOTHER holy fuck she is one fucking strong woman, and ugh, my chest was all locked and sobs, god i love her. and poor changmin, the tiny thing considering suicide at 15!? AHHHHH WTH IS THIS GO AWAY SADNESS. BEATS YOU WITH A STICK FOR MAKING ME SAD SO EARLY ON.
"Your dog ate my kimbap."
LMFAO JUNSU OMG I'M GONNA GO KIDNAP HIM AND BE A KIDNAPPER BUT IDEC KIMBAP OMG AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MANDOONGIE AHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHA
"I was born with some junk in the trunk, so sue me." He manages to mumble in reply, "Some? Try a lot," before getting smacked in the head by an indignant Junsu who pokes at him for being weak.
.......i won't even be able to handle it when jaejoong comes into this fic is junsu is already like this FUCKING CRYING WTF LMAO WTF
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Date: 2009-06-05 03:30 am (UTC)OMG I JUST FINISHED READING IT YOU BITCH SOBS okay just so you know my comments were written as i was reading so in case they don't make sense...well, now you know. anyway, this was so...idek how you do it! your writing is so easy to read and it just flows so well and when i saw that it was the end i wanted to punch my laptop screen in BECAUSE HOW COULD IT BE OVER ALREADY!?!?!?!? i never wanted it to end!! ;A; junsu and changmin in the beginning had my heart swelling like woah and then yoochun ahahahahaha that bad boy and then JAEJOONG holy shit i almost fucking died with sadness. you can go from so funny to so tragic in a hearbeat and i'm always so unprepared for what comes next, but i think that's one of the great things about your writing that i just love SO. FUCKING. MUCH. when yunho finally came in, accident prone and failing three thousand ways out of the universe, i seriously wanted to die. and then in the hospital, wondering about the anon donation thing? i swear, tears welled in my eyes at such a touching, genuine, loving gesture. you don't just do that for anyone. i could barely stand to keep reading. and by the way, all your side characters COUGH HEECHUL were amazing. everything you write is just...perfect. for me, if you don't believe in perfection, SO THERE. subjectivity = my argument is better than yours. 8DDDDv anyway, the way you ended it was tremendous. just a little sight into what happens later, and things don't change at all even when everything's changed so much. ahhhh i don't even know what else to say to you, my heart is so full. :'))))) i'm gonna be floating in a happy place for so long. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh okay enough with this fail i'm going to get to my quotes now sobs. ;3;
so.
here goes.
"I didn't let you die Shim Changmin, not when you were a five months old fetus with possibly Down's Syndrome and not when you were four pounds, two ounces shy of five and transfered to an incubator for ten days, I didn't let you die."
you always start with angst, you know that? but omfg, my heart was clenching so hard, and i LOVE HIS MOTHER holy fuck she is one fucking strong woman, and ugh, my chest was all locked and sobs, god i love her. and poor changmin, the tiny thing considering suicide at 15!? AHHHHH WTH IS THIS GO AWAY SADNESS. BEATS YOU WITH A STICK FOR MAKING ME SAD SO EARLY ON.
"Your dog ate my kimbap."
LMFAO JUNSU OMG I'M GONNA GO KIDNAP HIM AND BE A KIDNAPPER BUT IDEC KIMBAP OMG AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MANDOONGIE AHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHA
"I was born with some junk in the trunk, so sue me." He manages to mumble in reply, "Some? Try a lot," before getting smacked in the head by an indignant Junsu who pokes at him for being weak.
.......i won't even be able to handle it when jaejoong comes into this fic is junsu is already like this FUCKING CRYING WTF LMAO WTF